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ten things i dont love

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10.
i dont love how you never pick up on the little hints i keep handing out in heaping piles. or maybe you are clueing in, but i'd never be able to tell. i'm too trapped inside of you to notice anything you may be giving out. maybe you know, and you're just doing this to make everything a little bit harder each day. but you should know that i mean all of those little things to the sky and back again.

09.
i dont love how you play tricks on me. how you smile at me with those lips and look at me with those eyes and make me think i belong right there with those chocolate browns and pale pinks.

08.
i dont love lying awake at night making patterns in my ceiling with my imagination while i'm wide asleep waiting for you to curl up beside me, wrap your arms around me and tell me to never wake up. but if you're near, i'll live the rest of my life snoozing out the letter z and having nightmares about losing you.

07.
the way you look at things. you take everything so simply when to be completely honest they mean so much more than that. they mean shards of hearts and empty pockets and eyes filled with technicolor and morning breeze.

06.
i dont love the way you stutter. i know you're struggling to say the right things and you may or may not be getting nervous. but sometimes i'm just waiting for you to quit spilling out nonsense and slip up, stuttering out inchoerent messes about how you've loved me all this time. i'd like to cover your lips with mine, but you're too busy not shutting up to let me try.

05.
i dont love how often you resort me to anger and frustration and confusion and sadness and all those other silly things that no one really likes to feel.

04.
i dont love how when i'm trying to speak of your imperfections i'm coming up short. i dont love the fact that you're so amazing and filled with my capillarie wishes and long-time-no-see starlights.

03.
the way your freckles glimmer in the starlight. i'll never say that you arent beautiful but all it really does is make me want you more, and i cant have you.

02.
i dont love how i think i love you. as much of a good proclomation that may be, i cant take the amount of misunderstood satisfaction and counting sheep dreams.

01.
and last and maybe very well least,
i dont love how you dont love me. not even a little bit. not even at all.
full title: ten things i dont love about you.

this is part seven, i believe.
the rest of the series can be found here:

part one: [link]
part two: [link]
part three: [link]
part four: [link]
part five: [link]
part six: [link]
and this is part seven.
part eight: [link]
part nine: [link]
part ten: [link]

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:heart:

my apologies if any typos esacped.
haha oh the irony of typos. ^^
but.. yeah. let me know if you spot any.
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DanceWithoutYou's avatar
This is so amazing!!! I think the one that really sticks is the first because people keep telling me that if they don't love you back you just have to let go, I'm glad someone else thinks the opposite. <3